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Review:LunarLuna says:
Aww, that was so sweet and well written!^^ I loved the way Cedric was all excited and rambly at the very beginning, it sounded exactly like a little kid coming back from his first day of school. :3 Very well written, and the way you portrayed Cho was stunning too, I think you really captured her character well, and gave her a strong motherly touch that I found incredibly beautiful.^^

Apart from the characterization, I also love the general story, how Cho told the four challenges was great^^ And I have to admit I hadn't even seen the ending coming xD Though it probably should have been predictable what with the beginning, and it being Cho and telling that particular story... but I think was the way you wrote it. I felt almost clueless just like little Cedric^^

Very cute story!

xxx

-June

Author's Response: I'm so glad I got the characterisation right; I was worried about writing like an 11 year old! x'D

Haha I'm glad you were caught by surprise!! :D I feel like that would help you connect with little Ced :)

Thanks for the review!! :)


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