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Review:ScarletEye158 says:
Nice chapter :) Poor Mina can't even get someone like Severus to talk to her and I can't believe Lily is holding such a grudge!

I liked the interaction of James and Mina. She clearly also has a grudge, but for good reason. I'm surprised James doesn't understand why she's so upset... boys :p

I'm glad you're making this story longer than first planned! I really like your characters and plot line and I can't wait to see more of Sirius :D

Nice job!


Author's Response: I promise there will be a lot more Sirius in the next chapter. I'm so glad you liked this one!

I'm attempting to make the bullying (because that's what it is when you get down to it) realistic without taking too much from canon. James not remembering the incident is classic bully psychology; it has much more lasting power on the victim, but to the bully it's just kids being kids which is sometimes even worse for the victim.

And now I've gone off on a tangent, haha. Anyway, I'm nearly done with the next chapter and I'll be posting it very soon, hopefully!

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