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Review:Remus says:
Alright so apparently I read this one some time ago and either 1) I didn't leave a review or 2) I didn't finish it because I started reading it at work. I think I'm going with the latter since halfway through, I didn't recognize any of it.

Seriously, the narrative is fantastic. The very first paragraph really pulled me in and I was immediately interested what was going to happen. Astoria here is being...well, a non 12+ word here! Haha! The way that she's poking at Draco's anger is making me cringe just a bit. Its like watching a train wreck and you can't look away!

Aww! This was horribly sad!! :( Now I understand where Astoria is coming from. At first you were great at portraying Draco as this mean, horrible human being and that Astoria wanted to leave. However, you were fantastic at slowly revealing the real reason why she 'hates' Draco. The detail...the narrative...it really made this story flow.

Draco's personality is amazing. I loved how he really, really tries to bring her back. To show Astoria that he loves her and when she leaves in the end...I just wanted to hug him.

Ever since Dan's story I've become more of a Draco/Astoria fan. So thank you for writing a story about my new favorite couple. XD

--Rosie

P.S. The Pass the Parcel rules said that it had to be a 'story'. So, idk if chapters counted...in order to not lose any points against Slytherin I reviewed this one-shot instead. :) Otherwise I would've read chapter 4 of Before They Fall! XD

Author's Response: Ahhh I'm so happy you like this ♥ ♥ when I finish Before They Fall, Astoria and Draco are next. These two really pull to me!

I'm so happy you understood where Astoria was coming from because a lot of people haven't. I think that only reading half of the story may contribute to that.. '

I can't imagine being in her situation. It would be heartbreaking. Dan is what actually sparked these two for me, also! Geez, we're going to have to send that man cookies or something!

Thank you so much for doing such am amazing review Rosie ♥

Jami


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