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Review:adluvshp says:
Here for Pass the Parcel.

Aw, this was such a sad yet intense story. I liked your portrayal of Remus. I think his insecurity, his 'being stuck' feeling, his fears, they were well written and well justified.

The few beginning paragraphs really made me feel very sad for him. The way you wrote about him feeling 'damaged' was very touching.

I also loved the interaction between Tonks and him, and their sweet exchange of "I love you". It was really so tender, it made me go aww.

The hope Remus felt was very palpable towards the end. I liked the positivity with which it was written.

All in all, I loved your story. Remus was so perfect, Tonks was spot-on, the plot was great, and the ending was really very sweet.

My favorite phrase was "dragging him out of shadows, demons, ghosts, and monsters... she was saving him." I really liked that.

Super writing!! A full deserved 10/10 =)

Cheers
AD
(AditiDraco95)

Author's Response: Cheers! I'm glad you liked it, and that you think I portrayed Remus well.

I'm glad you liked the positivity at the end. That was what I was going for - this is the turning point for him, the point where he realises what Tonks has known all along, that he is a human being first and a werewolf second.

I'm glad you liked that line too - that's how I always saw Tonks - she was the one that saved Lupin, the one that showed him that he can still have those basic human things - like love and a family. She saved him, because she brought him out of the dark world in which he lived, if that makes any sense at all!

Anyway, cheers for picking this story - I'm glad you liked this :)


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