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Review:Shortie says:
Whoa. I must say, whoa. This is a great fic.

I'm so glad that the wand description and the five uses of blood weren't crammed in. I've seen enough of the Task one stories with all the prompts crammed in uselessly so yay you :D

The prompts you have used have been inserted very skillfully and smoothly. I didn't feel like I was reading a story with prompts in it, rather like, I was reading a fantastic Narcissa story. So then again, Go YOU!

I didn't find any mistakes in grammar or vocabulary. So great work there.

I love the plot. You have taken so little and said so much. And who says Lucius can't have a patronus? Why can't he? Given the fact that he breeds/pets albino peacocks, it's a possibility.

So all in all this is great. Really really amazing :D

Happy passing the parcel :D


Author's Response: Hey! Thanks a lot for reading and reviewing.

I am glad that you liked my story and that you think all the prompts weren't uselessly crammed in and found the story good.

Aw fantastic Narcissa story? Really? Thank you! And I am happy you didnt find any grammar or vocabulary mistakes either.

Haha thanks for the patronus comment too. I am relieved to know you think it can work.

Thank you so much once again!

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