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Review:adluvshp says:
Here for Pass the Parcel!

Aw this was such a cute little story! I loved how you portrayed little eleven year old Harry and Hermione. The possibility of them having met in the Muggle world before hogwarts is quite cool, and I liked how you explored it. Your description of Harry's thoughts was nicely done too - they were very innocent like an 11 year old's. Hermione and Harry's interaction was real cute too, especially the part where Hermione thinks that she wants to kiss him but doesn't want it to be a 'friendship one night stand'. Haha, that was cute.
One thing that disconcerted me a little was where you described Hermione's dress as fitting every curve of her body. I just find it a little odd for an 11 year old girl, but then perhaps it's just me - I am picturing 11 as way too small :P
Rest, I really liked reading your story. It was a different one, and I enjoyed it. It was one cute piece :)

10/10

Cheers!
AD
(AditiDraco95)

P.S. I am aware I used the word 'cute' quite a number of times, but I just couldn't help it. There's no better word to describe your story other than cute, hehe.

Author's Response: Thanks for the reivew!!! Woot you picked to review on of my favorite stories! This story was just a joy to write, but it is even better to read. I'm glad you enjoyed it so much! I have been told that concern a lot, but I was still a high schooler when I wrote this. honestly you would be shocked what jr highers walked in looking like. many 11 and 12 year olds look like 16 year olds now days. It's weird, but true so that's why i've never changed it. Thanks for the review again!

Love,
Am.Ginny

P.S hahaha it's all good. It was suppose to be a cute story ;)

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