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Review:marissa lily potter says:
I have to say, I squeed a little when I saw that you requested a review! :)

But anyway, I love this story! I'm not much of a fan of Peter Pettigrew and every time I read about him, I have the strong urge to throw something but I managed to sit myself through this story quite contently! It was unique, interesting and above all, very well written! The attention to detail is unbelievable. I love the small things like Christine tucking her hair behind her ear. I absolutely love details and you've done a fantastic job with them!

Also, characterization was great. You introduced new characters in this story but within a matter of seconds, I felt as though I had known them for a very long time. The way you connected everyone together even though it was from different points of views was just great. I love the original characters you chose and the way you integrated them into the story really made it seem like they belonged and it couldn't have been done otherwise.

It was an interesting one-shot and I definitely enjoyed it. It seemed so natural the way everything happened and I especially love how you added Christine's point of view. I think that was very important, having one of the victims' view. It really does make the story believable and overall, natural because in real life, innocent people do get hurt doing everyday things. I can't really say much when it comes to criticism because I have none for you.

You're a terrific author who seems to excel at every story no matter the genre or era. Absolutely amazing work with this one!

-marissa lily potter

Author's Response: Did you really? Well, I'm always glad to oblige! :D And by saying that, of course, I just mean thank you for taking the time to review anything of mine, requested or no, because it really is very much appreciated!

I don't generally like Pettigrew either, but for some reason a lot of what I've been writing within, oh, the past year or so has necessitated a lot of him. ;) I try and approach his character with as sympathetic a mindset as possible.

I'm so happy you liked this story! I very much want, in everything I write, for people to feel like my characters aren't just people on a screen. And sometimes that's a hard thing to get around, but your compliments really are so encouraging to that end. I wrote this story for a friend of mine for Christmas, as a request from her, but I'm quite surprised at how much /I/ ended up enjoying it, too! (Then again, I'm not -- we sometimes tend to think alike!)

You are much too sweet. ♥ Thank you so much for being willing to leave me a review on this story! I'm extremely pleased you found it to your liking! :)

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