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Review:CherryBoom says:
Hi! I'm here for the Pass the Parcel!

This one-shot intrigued me immediately, since I've never before read any fanfics about Phineas Nigellus Black. You made an excellent comparison between his limited existence as a portrait and Sirius's not-so-voluntary stay at Grimmauld Place. And it was so sad to see Sirius locked in that musty old place.

Phineas felt very book-like and I really like his need to oppose anyone who isn't like him. The other portraits were nice addition to this fic.

Your flow was excellent and dialogue felt very natural. While I quite liked your ending, a part of me would have liked to see a talk between Sirius and Phineas. The idea of Phineas giving a pep talk to him (in his own crooked way) would have been the icing on top of the cake.

Author's Response: Hi!

Thanks a lot for reading and reviewing. I am glad you liked it, and that you felt I made a nice comparison between Sirius and Phineas' existence.

I never thought about Phineas giving Sirius a pep talk, but now that you've mentioned it, I may just consider it :D

Thanks a lot for your input once again!


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