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Review:Siriuslover177 says:
Wow, I absolutely love the emotion, and description you put into this story, despite only being 500 words. It broke my heart, when she said how he had to leave so early, and how she doesn't like it. Also, the part about Neville not always being a man, or not always being the one who helped win the war, I loved that you added that into there, because it gave the story a great feel I believe.
Also, the end, "Oh Neville. I am your savior, too" I loved that line so much. Great touch.
I loved it, and great job getting it to 500 words, nice job.

~Sarah
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Author's Response: Hi! Thanks for coming by :)

I'm glad you felt like this story "packed a punch" even with its brevity. I definitely do view Neville as a normal guy, despite his recent claims to fame, and I think Hannah would love that about him as well. I'm happy that you liked the ending of this piece, too.

Thanks for your very kind review!

-Amanda


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