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Review:adluvshp says:
(Pass the Parcel review)

hello! This was a cute little one shot. I was a little confused at what's happening at first but then I got the hang of it. I loved Lily, James and Sirius' characterizations. Lily was so funny. I quite liked reading this piece, and it brought a smile to my face. The last line was like a bombshell though, I mean it was just one little line but it said so much, expressed so much. A sort of intense ending to such a cute fluffy one shot. A really nice piece of writing. You could fix some spacing issues though :)

Good job! 9/10

Cheers!
AD
(AditiDraco95)

Author's Response: Ahh the formatting! I know I'm learning :D

Oooo you got the last line? I was worried that I didn't make sense because everyone asked me "What's the point of adding that line" So yeah was dead worried. I'n glad you understood it.

I love these three. Sirius is my favourite. I pet him too much but hey! The love of my life so I can do that :P Hehe

thank you for the lovely review Ad.

*Hugs*


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