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Review:Pixileanin says:
I hadn't ever occurred to me that Duncan had never been to the British Ministry before. You wrote it from such a fresh perspective that I almost didn't realized that's where they were going. Ahh, and the mission is delightfully mundane! That should be right up Duncan's alley. And I can't wait to see what kind of crazy he pulls to get through that.

It's great to see characters from Durmstrag socializing with each other. We know they did, but there are so very few stories that deal with that. I am quite intrigued with this aspect of your plot.

"Riddle's voice rose and he flapped his arms dramatically as his speech moved closer to a crescendo..." This was quite a picture, and if I imagined it correctly, very Russian too... or kind of like an overconfident, arrogant duck, if Riddle had been rotund and not as fit as you say he was. :) )

Interesting chapter!

Author's Response: Yeah most of Duncan's magical experience was abroad, so it was a new experince for him to see the Ministry, but after everything he's seen, he doesn't really get surprised anymore.

One of my goals in this story was to outline some of the origins of the death eaters. They seem to have a Russian connection with the liks of Dolohov and Karkaroff, so I like to expand on that a bit.

And I pretty much pictured Riddle as your standard dictator here

Thanks for the review!


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