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Review:angel_speaks says:
EM here with a pass the parcel review!

Grammar/ spelling: There were only one or two of these. Nevertheless, good job!

Characterization: This is definitely the first fan fic that i've read that centered around Marcus Flint. I think that your Marcus was really well written but I think that adding more details describing how he looked (especially, at this point in his life) would really help 'stabilize' the this time frame. I say this because the last time any of us had seen him was during the CoS, I'm pretty sure he would've changed by now.

Plot: This is really interesting. The idea of him looking to establish a career and on top of that, facing an arrange marriage. I think adding a little bit more of emotion would add to the dramatic effect of those life events.

I think that you did a good job with this piece!

Happy Writing!

Author's Response: Hello! I would love to write more about Marcus because he is such an underrated character, though this was so short I wasn't given a chance to develop him as a character but I definitely want to write about him in the future :)

Thank you for your review :)

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