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Review:Shortie says:
Omg. Just OMG *sob* *sob* *sob* Waha

This is really really sad. I love it. The story is brilliant but I'm tearing. Sorry *Sniff*

Two mistakes I found, one is "Doctor" was that deliberate or did you forget Healer? If it was deliberate no issue :) And I think James and Remus and the other two were together in the Hogwarts express in their first year. So I guess that was deliberate as well so no biggie.

I love the way you've written a whole lifetime in one little one shot perfectly. It's perfect. I mean, everything a novel would have expressed is here, only better written. So go you!

I love the emotional way you've written. I love the phases. Man I'm saying love for everything because I love everything.

Please write more of this. You're a terrific author.

*Hugs*

Author's Response: Aaaah thank you so thank you! I'm so glad you liked this so much. I think just James and Sirius met on the Hogwarts Express in first year, but I could be mistaken...? Hm. Going to have to look that one up now.
I'm on the fence about the Healer/Doctor thing :/ I think my mind sees a difference between the capitalized Doctor and the uncapitalized doctor and I was assuming that Healers were all doctors even if they weren't Doctors...if that makes sense? Might have to change that, though. Good catch! :D
Thank you so very much for all of your compliments and your mistake-catching! You are awesome and I really appreciate this lovely review.


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