Dan's so awesome! he's WAY better than Potter. Potter is a rattlesnake with hydrochloric acid for blood and arsenic for venom. he's stupid. but i like Dan! he seems like a really good guy. argumentative, just like Aimee, but really sweet, too. i can't believe Aimee was engaged. that's just...wow. i also can't believe the press didn't get a hold of that. man, that would've been interesting. now, why didn't Aimee say, "I'm fake-dating James Potter for a new apartment because my current apartment is terrible and the press will have a major spazz if the see us together" instead of, "I'm dating James Potter blah blah blah". that distinction would have cleared up a lot of stuff. particularly the nasty verbal fight i'm anticipating for the next chapter (i really don't want to see a nasty verbal fight because i like Dan a lot but, of course, this is fanfiction and nothing will ever be simple because it's just no fun if it's simple). but! i did really like this chapter. no Potter (i seriously don't like him) and some Mark action! i like Mark, too. please tell me he finds a good girl by the end of this. or maybe a good guy, who knows. yeah, there weren't too many grammar/punctuation/English mistakes. it was legible, if that's what you're concerned about. please update soon! i can't wait to find out what happens next and i really mean that.
Author's Response: ahaha, so you're one of the dan supporters, huh? it makes me laugh ~ it seems very split down the middle. people either love dan or they really hate him, and are like WHAT IS HE DOING HERE WE NEVER ASKED FOR HIM TO BE HERE BLARGHHH. well, maybe not quite like that, but you get the gist. wow, you really don't like james, i have to say :P maybe that's because he's such a nasty little snappy chap. dan was really nuts about aimee, he was absolutely mad about her ~ and she was mad about him. the reason aimee didn't say that is in the next chapter... wait, no it isn't, it's in the chapter after that. i'm getting confused. IT'S SOON, ANYWAY. she did have a reason for lying to him. dan wouldn't want to yell at aimee, anyway ~ he's not potter. well, you'll be thrilled to know that james is back in the next chapter! try to hold back from dancing around with joy and excitment, my love. i know you're secretly thrilled. mark is my baby... he can't find a girl because he is mine and therefore i am his girl. comprende? ahaha, thank you :) i didn't think this chapter was too bad, but the last one was awful. it was really, really bad. blargh. anyway, thank you so much and the next chapter of this is in the queue now :D
ellie :) xx