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Review:academica says:
Hi! Here from Pass the Parcel :)

This is really cute. I really like your imagery, especially how you described Filch's office (and Filch himself, horror of horrors!). I also admire the way you've sort of interwoven background information about your OC into the main story line. So often I read stories - a lot of them being next-gen, incidentally, perhaps because of all the OCs needed for that era - where the author just sort of plops it down in a paragraph or two at the beginning and skips off into the plot afterwards. Your way of doing it seems much more natural, and so I'd like to offer you kudos on your method :)

I like the characterization of James - he's not just a prankster or bully, but an interesting combination of both. I can see a little of both his namesakes' personalities in there. I also like Emmy - her sleepwalking predicament is interesting, and it seems different from the various Mary Sue-ish cliche problems that I see so often with OCs. Again, kudos on the originality in this story :)

Great job! I'm sure the next chapter will be neat!

-Amanda

Author's Response: Hi! And thank you for stopping by for the review! =)

Yay, I'm really happy that my background planning and plotting works for this fic, because it's definitely needed for getting where I want this fic eventually to end up.

James and Emmy are quite a pair. =) But with both of them, what you see, isn't exactly what you get. And with that mysterious note (mwahaha), I'll end this response. =)

Thanks again. The House Cup was so fun!

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