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Review:Jchrissy says:
Bah you are so mean! You are a bad girl writing all these emotional breaks into such a short story! You want to break my heart, don't you?

I love, love, love this. Everything about it.She loves Teddy.I think Teddy really does love V, but can't resist Molly. Victoire is the picture of innocence in this. She loves her new husband and just wants him. Ayden is, also. Maybe they should just go be together so these two scarlet letter people can also be together. But, Teddy doesn't want her (Molly) forever, does he?

This just made me think so much. And it made me want more. Actually, I want the same exact one shot but from Teddy's PoV. I want to know what he's thinking and feeling.

Your style in this is captivating. Everything feels hopeless, yet still beautiful.

It took all my self control not to read the next chapter of WAT for Pass the Parcel, but I thought it would be fun to explore more of your works. I was right!!!

Beautiful one shot, Mel!

Author's Response: Ahh! I actually had to go and glance over this story to remind myself what it was. How sad is that?

This is a twisted little tale... Teddy definitely wants Molly, but he doesn't love her. When she professes her love to him, he tells her that she'll find somebody who will love her someday. I had a phase around the time I wrote this where I had a lot of shady portrayals of Teddy. It was quite fun. :)

Thank you so much for you continued support. You are the peanutbutter to my jelly. :)



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