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Review:Levana says:
Hey there!

I love your story. I thought the emotion behind the story was beautifully written. I only saw a few mistakes in your writing and they were all typos, so great job with the grammar too!

I think the way you incorporated the prompts into your story was brilliantly down. I loved the how you used Neville being the Dragon of his Heart as the 'Features a Dragon' prompt (at least that's what I assume, I hope I'm right!) it was very unique and very well thought out.

My favorite part was definitely the diary entry. I absolutely loved the emotion in it (it made me cry!) and his faith in his son. It really showed that he wouldn't care if his son couldn't do magic like the others and that he would still be successful in life.

Great job with this story! I think it really gave Neville the justice that he deserves. And great job fitting the prompts in so seamlessly.

~Levana

Author's Response: Awww I cried while writing it too *sob*

Thank you for the lovely review. Yeah this story is with my beta now. Once she's through with it all the typos would be gone :D

I really didn't want the prompts to stand out. More than the prompts I wanted my plot to come out nice. This is a plot that came into my head so randomly so I wanted to write it down the same way and not do anything to it. Luckily the prompts I used weren't hard to poke in so no biggie there.

Thank you for the lovely review Levana :D

*Hugs*

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