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Review:Shortie says:
It's Imerius Curse, not imperio.

Sorry. That's a mistake I've seen in a lot of task 1 stories. :) No biggie though.

You've used all the prompts. Something I wasn't able to do. the first bit I must say went smoothly. The use of the prompts wasn't that obvious. But the Dragon blood and wand part stood out. I think this is because I've been seeing a lot of stories with these two prompts standing out but hey, you used them all, so go you!

This is the first ever task 1 story of another house I've read. Cho is not among my favourites but you managed to make me not hate her throughout the story, so again, go you :D

I like the ending line. Very, what should I say, catchy.

All in all this is a very good story. apart from my paranoid remarks up there, I loved it. I love the fact that she still thinks about Cedric. I mean, he was like, the love of her life yeah?

I think.

Nice going love :)


Author's Response: Dang - I knew there was a mistake of some sort in there! Nice eye you've got there, though ;) No one else who've reviewed have spotted that mistake, so well done, you! To be honest with you, I didn't like Cho much at first, either, but I warmed up to her in this and I'm glad you did, too! This was one of the few times I managed to write an effective last line, so thanks!

All in all, this was a lovely review, so thanks a bunch! I really appreciate it :) See you around the forums, love. *hugs back*

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