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Review:hdawg says:
Your quote at the beginning has been swimming at the corners of my memory during the reading of this fic. This was the line that made me cry the first time I read the book because it just seemed to hit me in all the sore places. And this fic is doing the same (although I'm not crying...yet). I just hope it's an ending with catharsis (aka it's real, not a dream ;))

Ohmygosh the Dark Mark bit made my imagination run wild for a moment. I thought maybe things from reality and his dreams had crossed, like maybe there was a Voldemort but it didn't involve Harry or something. And then I read that Draco just had a normal tattoo and I was sad. You got me again!

Ahehe, this is so lovely and cocky, like the proper (happier) Draco: "There, written in between his wrist and elbow in elaborate calligraphy, are the words 'PROPERTY OF DRACO MALFOY'." And their relationship bliss is making me squee in jealousy. Don't try and take these happy feelings away from me!

"Harry tells himself that at least Draco is attracted to green eyes and dark hair and then absolutely refuses to try and figure out why that matters to him so much." This bit, just.this bit. You know what I'm trying to say, but I can't get it out right. I'm sorry.

"The hand-drawn words "PROPERTY OF D -" are peeking out from under his sleeve, the dark ink of the pen startlingly clear against the pale skin of his forearm." AH. WHY WOULD YOU SAY THIS. THE THOUGHTS ARE RUNNING THROUGH MY HEAD AGAIN. AH. "But Harry knows, without a doubt, that if he were to take a sample of Draco Malfoy's handwriting and compare it to the writing on his body, the two would be an exact match."

"And it isn't that Draco is mindblowingly attractive or anything." Lies. Pure lies again. I thought I'd told you to stop saying these things, Harry?

And Harry's little jealousy thing is so cute and real and I fel so many fels. Eugh Annie, you are bloody fantastic and I am so jealous and so wrapped up in your world that I don't want to stop reading but it's going to end soon :(

You handled the sex scene very well. At least I hope that was meant to be a sex scene or I am reading too much into their kissing. It was easy to read. These words that I am saying are all wrong, but you know what I mean. I could read it and not get cringed out. And that's a feat in itself, because I get cringed out by the simplest of things, like people singing. Yeah.

"Harry wishes he could wake up here every morning for the rest of his life. " MY HEART ;_; WHY DO YOU DO THIS TO ME?

Only one chapter to go and I am too sad for this just to be a story, and possibly not even real :'(

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