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Review:hdawg says:
A world without Voldemort, eh? This certainly is an alternative universe. I like it. It's

OHMYGOSH HIS PARENTS ARE ALIVE. I am really looking forward to meeting them (I hope he meets them) and how he interacts with them. JKR never really wrote a lot about their talking together, but this sounds like it could be...interesting. Especially as it sounds like James and Lily have broken up.

It's pure love, that's what it is: "Harry tells himself that he barely notices the way the material of Draco's T-shirt stretches over his shoulders as he watches him walk away." I love it. So simple, but speaks volumes. You are the queen of inferred meanings!

Lily's dead :'( why do you mess with my emotions in this way? I was really looking forward to hearing what she had to say about Harry, and Draco, and now you've taken her away from me :'( mean Annie.

I dislike James, and I don't like disliking him. But this, this bit broke my heart: "Throwing himself down on the sofa, Harry shoves his face into a cushion to muffle the sound and sobs like a child for hours." It's so powerful. Harry's been stuck as a child for years, unable to move on because of the death of his parents and having to grow up prematurely because of Voldemort, but he'd still just a child who wants his parents to love him. And it's so upsetting that his father is like this. I do love, however, the way that Harry doesn't consciously defend his relationship with Draco, like it's a natural reaction - as I said before, it makes it feel so real.

Woo Harry! "This may have been a different world, this dream, but Harry was still Harry, and if he had thought something was worth fighting for before, then Harry was going to try and figure out why." I feel things for him again. You are wonderful, Annie, you really are.

Mac? Ernie Macmillan? That's my guess. But Harry is happy(ish), and I like this alternative world. I want to say something more substantial for this review to be meaningful, but I am feelings things and enjoying it far too much to think of coherent ways of writing my thoughts down. I'm sorry :( but this is truly brilliant.

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