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Review:I_heart_Redheads says:
I truly been enjoying your story, although I feel sometimes it's dragging a bit. However, I'm on the edge of my seat waiting to know what will happen next though, filled with anticipation, even with the feeling of knowing how the story will end. Furthermore, I am honestly hoping for a Hermione and Ron reconciliation. I'm not really understanding why Draco and Hermione fell in love. I can understand Ron and Lavendar's --even though I can't stand her--relationship because of "their baby" and the feelings of becoming parents, meaning there's a connection...as far as Draco goes he seems like a jerk who wants it his way and I'm not entirely convinced of his (and Hermione's) romantic feelings. His character doesn't seem like he developed much. If he truly loves Hermione, he would be protective --which he is--but willing to let by gones be by gones and help her move on by being cordial at least to the people she cares about. I absolutely love your story, I'm just hoping for more substance with Draco/Hermione story, rather than some game--it has to be real. Until then, I'm rooting for Ron and Hermione. Also, I also appreciate you taking the ages and the family of the characters, it makes their situations realistic. Overall, your story been the next best thing to soaps. What can I say, I love drama, can't wait for the next chapters!!!

Author's Response: Awh, thank you so very much! I'm sorry you don't feel like the characters are developed enough, I'll work on that. I've been editing the chapters on my computer and they're much better than they currently are (: I'll upload them soon. Writing this has truly been a learning process and I'm working on becoming a better writer. I've been working on this for nearly two years and my writing has definitly changed,. I'll keep working on it though, and developing the characters more. Draco/Hermione do love each other, they just don't show it that much. Ron/Lavender are more complicated. Ron feels kind of like he should be with her for his daughter's sake and well, Lavender has wanted to be with him since sixth year. Draco isn't sure about how to be around her. He's never been in love before and he's really never cared about anyone (other than himself) like he cares abut her. I'm glad you're enjoying it, it certainly is full of drama! Lol Next chapter is awaiting approval. Thanks for the review.

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