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Review:deluminator says:
Do you want to share that chocolate ice-cream? This one-shot is so very sad.

I don't want to say that I "enjoyed" reading this as it is such a grim tale but it is an engaging read and it is so incredibly well written. I loved the addition of the chess terms throughout.

Your characterisation of Ron is brilliant. All his thoughts are just the sort of bleak things I imagine adolescent Ron would have. And I do like the way you included his insecurities in a realistic and relatable way as opposed to the simple-minded and trivial Ronald Weasley I oft come across in fics.

Really well done!

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