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Review:Voldys_Moldy says:
screw Lemonade (even though i read that too). update this! you can't leave us with a cliffhanger like that! that just ain't cool, man. ah, poor Potter and his blatant disregard for the rules of pretty much everything, as far as i can tell. cheating, fouling, making innuendoes and implications at a mealtime. he does seem like a jerk though. "Oh, yeah, I won't do anything for this project. You'll do it all and I know we'll get an excellent grade because you're you." jerk. but i liked him more in this chapter. Carrie. my, my, what an interesting character. oh, and my i remark on the interesting situation of Albus being the captain (and also punching his brother in the nose after said brother pulled a Mclaggen) and one of the Woods being unable to play Quidditch. ah, and i also like Lyra. she is a nerd, as am i, and i like her for it. also for her personality and her narrations. she's a pretty sweet character. until next time (which i dearly hope will be soon)!

Author's Response: This review, and the fact that I'm listening to the The Dark Knight Rises soundtrack right now, has made me smile like never before. 1.Sorry about the cliffhanger, but you know I have chapter 3 written and waiting to be queued as soon as chapter 6 of Lemonade is validated, and so it won't be an intensely long wait. :D
2.James is fun to write. A lot. Mostly because I can literally make do him anything I want and it still fits his personality because he's so hard to get.
3. I'm glad you liked my weird portrayals of those characters. I just thought it would be nice to try breaking the cliche of James being the Quidditch captain and all that.
4. I'm glad you like Lyra because she's based on me, which means you like me! :D
Thanks for the review and I hope the next one doesn't disappoint!


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