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Review:ScarletEye158 says:
Aww this was so sad! I really liked how you just jumped right into the memories of him and James, it really showed how close they were and how much they loved each other :) I also really liked how you would have a memory, and then come back to real life and then go right back into a memory again. It showed how Sirius was feeling and I could tell he was obviously trying to get away to a better place and try to ignore the fact of reality.

I thought you did really well with you proverb! The bit where James and Sirius did the blood pact was cute and totally like them. They would have done anything to be closer to each other and I really liked how you characterized them :D

The parts with Harry and Sirius were also really well done(: Sirius definitely didn't have any time with his family so having him have such a great bond with Harry is totally realistic and I just loved how Harry stopped crying the instant Sirius comforted him(:

Even though I loved the memories, I had to re-read them a few times because I wasn't entirely sure when one started and ended. maybe you could put the memories in italics or something to make it stand out more? I think it'd be easier to follow, otherwise, the story was great! :D

Nice job as always and I hope you're able to get your other stories updated soon, too(;

-Amanda

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