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Review:Gabriella Hunter says:
Hello!

I instantly hopped onto this when I had the time to devote to the wonderful writing! So here I am! :D
I really liked this chapter, it was very eye opening for Pansy and where she wanted to be in her life. It was a bit funny (Even though I know how it feels) when she was waiting for a reply on her resume and still trying to preserve her pride. It was even more startling to me that she had sent off something to the Quibbler of all places and I knew that her desperation must have reached its max to give in to something like that! But her daily routine and her goals seem to be sliding out of her control for just a moment because I was a little concerned when she started talking to her reflection again. Not quite happy about that but I hope she breaks out of that and finds someone to trust, that was a very well written part as well. I had assumed that she hadn't exactly broached alot of tender moments while in Slytherin and it was more than apparent in this chapter. But she has done something I didn't expect! She has written a letter that was more of a shove in the "popular" opinion and I was very surprised. But she has to do what she can to survive, right? I wonder how this will affect her relationships with the other wizards and witches she'll come into contact with. I'm really eager for more! :D
Much love,
Gabbie

Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing! I'm so happy that you liked this chapter- yes, Pansy's life is finally moving along. I know it's a little odd that she sent something off to the Quibbler, but don't forget that she really wants to repair her reputation in society and getting a job at the Quibbler would go a long way in showing that she's changed. It would also help because she'd have a more active role in its publication.

I'm glad that you liked that part of the chapter- poor Pansy is finally realizing that she doesn't have any friends, except for her reflection (if she can even count her, that is).

Yes- she's written to the Archives now. However, you'll just have to wait and see what happens! The next chapter should be up in about a week's time! Thanks once again for reading!


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