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Review:Dezire_427 says:
First thing first...if you don't continue with this story, then i'm going to have your head. Your writing style and this plotline are so fantastical, that you just can't abandon this story. Its a definite change from finding faith, I really, really like it.
I also love the way you've described the situation through Jame's Pov, it really gives a new perspective to the clichéd old teen pregnancy story, about what goes on in the mind of an adolocent father-to-be...Great job!
Fav part: James blaming coconuts. Really cracked up on that part.:D
Eagerly lying in wait for the next update of both of your stories,
Your greatest fan,
PS. My mum's name is Leena as well, so you can imagine how kinda awkward it was for me to read. :)

Author's Response: Well, if I must continue writing... I shall. But only because you asked so nicely. The next chapter and a half are written, so updates shouldn't take too long. You just have to wait until I'm back from vacation.

I've always thought the guy should have more say in these stories. It's always interested me to know what goes on in their heads. So... therefore, this story was born. And I think I quite like it...

Coconuts are awesome. And James is insane. But in a good way :)


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