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Review:Jchrissy says:
Oh my gosh this was such an amusing read. I love that you have Lily in Ravenclaw and that Alice is the one to instigate the bad behavior. It's such a different set of characterizations!

This is also the first story I've read that has Lily and Alice in the same year! But it makes perfect sense. I don't see why they couldn't be, and it's really fun to see how far the Longbottoms and Potters have come together.

Your writing is very smooth and I think you do a great job of not making obvious dialogue tags. You are creative when doing them, making the story feel more realistic.

I also like that you've made Lily good at potions, I think it's very possible it could have been a family trait and passed down from the grandmother she never had the chance to know.

I love the creativity to this, everything is so fresh and enthusiastic that it made it so much fun to read!!

Great one shot, and congratulations on the honorable mention!!!

Jami

Author's Response: Ah, hello there, my 80th reviewer! :) I can't believe you came and reviewed - you really shouldn't have, but I'm not complaining about it at all :p I think I ended up defying most of the Lily cliches in this story - being put in Ravenclaw, still cheeky but not as much as Alice and all that good stuff. I've seen various Alices, too, like you, and you're right, most of them are in Albus' year, but it's still really fun to write them.

Thanks a bunch for the review, Jami, and all those compliments! -squishes- This was so sweet, and a lovely 80th review for me :p See you around the forums, love!

Linn


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