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Review:The Last Marauder says:
I really liked this one too - I never thought of doing a fic from Arianna's point of view. If I was doing this scene it would be from Albus's or Aberforth's, but Arianna's is by far the most interesting - I just never thought about it before.

I really liked how simple this was, how Arianna understood what was going on, and at the same time didn't. She didn't understand the danger of the fight in the sitting room. I loved how you had her count the steps, the counting was rooting her to the world, helping her stay in control. I loved hearing all her thoughts too!

Congrats on getting a podcast of this story - that's a brilliant achievement and I'll definitely listen to it later (no sound on school computers!).

Anyway great job, well done :)

Author's Response: I don't like going for the obvious. Minor characters are people too and have feelings and emotions just like the main ones. I prefer to explore those and show a whole new side to characters we don't give a second glance to.
What people tend to forget is that she wasn't a child. She was in her mid-teens, and while she hadn't had the life experience most people had by her age, she had faced so much pain that her emotions were well developed. She has bigger attachments to those who were close because they were the only people she had, and we tend to be more protective towards the people we love.
Thank you so much for the review!!

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