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Review:CharlieDay says:
Hi, it's me, here with a review
It was a very nice story line, I think it sort of highlights Hermione's healing process in a very nice way, I also thought it was nice that you used such an appropriate song. Sometimes the songs people use in songfics aren't quite right, but this seemed perfect for the story.
My main issue in this story was the fact that Sirius' speech was in italics. Why was that? I would've assumed it was because he was a ghost. However, in canon, the formatting of the ghost' speech was just the same as the formatting of anyone else's, so I'm not sure.
I also thought it was great that you bolded the lyrics, it made what was going on really clear. Finally, I thouht the finish was really nice, it seemed to fit wit the story well, and really left the reader with a strong impression of the story as a whole.
Sorry if this review was a little short, I found it quite hard to review because I don't really normally review stuff like this, so I wasn't sure what to say. I hope this is okay,
Charlie

Author's Response: Hey, thanks for reviewing, of course it's ok! :)
Ill go back and change the formatting, I wasn't sure so thanks for that!
I'm glad you thought the song fit! :)
Thanks again :)

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