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Review:CharlieDay says:
Hi, I'm (finally) here with your requested review!
I loved the Pride and Prejudice references, and the first paragraph was great! I liked how Will's character was quite different from Mr Darcy's, so he wasn't just a copy.
This chapter was also very funny, so you did well if it was your first try at humour and fluff in a while. Dom's voice was very unique, and her relationship with her family was believable, and I laughed out loud at the part about Dom sending Louis away so she could kiss Will, and then Louis returning.
The only thing I really had an issue with was the fact that there was a lot of dialogue. Now, I don't really mind that, but it puts some people off, I find.
Your Grammar and spelling was wonderful, I didn't notice any mistakes at all, which was, as I said, great. It's always nice to see stories like that. They just read so much better!
I definitely want to read more of this, it was super funny and I can see it turning into a super fun story!
Thank you so much for letting me review this great, great story. It was just my kind of thing!
Charlie

Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked it! Yeah, Will isn't really like Mr Darcy at all, which makes it all the more bemusing for him to be constantly compared to him. Oh, I'm so relieved you found it funny! It's quite easy to write something that you yourself find funny, but then I worry that it will just be me and that I just have a strange sense of humour...

Ahh, I thought there might be. I much prefer writing dialogue to writing description etc, so I tend to have a lot of it. Thanks for pointing that out -I'll have a look and try to balance it out a bit.

Gahh thanks so much! I'm really glad you liked it, and thanks for the great review!


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