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Review:WitnesstoitAll says:
Another great chapter!!

I loved being able to see the alternative perspective from Bellatrix and the Death Eaters at Malfoy Manor. I feel like you did a realy great job characterizing her, so kudos to you!! She's a really difficult one to work with. I loved the way you sort of focused on Bellatrix's psychosis, her obsession with Voldemort's approval, etc. It was very believable and well written.

I'm very intrigued abou their motives, but am going to go out on a limb to guess that they're after James?

Talk about starting up lots of little plotty things!! Omg. Now I must know whatever it is Sirius was about to tell James. I was so frustrated when Petere interrupted. While I'm on the subject of peter, I think you did a good job with is characterization -- the little tidbit about his parents seperation was a lovely touch.

Ahh. I love the continued use of the name, truth, password combination for the head dorms. I'm interested to see what sort of truths will come out of it. Professions of Jily love, perchance? ;)

This is such an enjoyable read and I'm so glad I found it. Good work!!

xoxo
Melissa

Author's Response: Your reviews make me so so happy! You're spoiling me!

Yes, at this point it's okay to know that they are...intrigued by James. Sirius. You are really going to feel sad for Sirius when this comes out :(. I just want to hug him.

Yay pay extra special attention to that password, secret thing ;).

Thank you so much for these amazing reviews! Crossing my fingers chapter 6 is up tonight!



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