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Review:firefly910 says:
Okay so I know you specifically outlined the fact that Sirius doesn't love Beth in your last review response and I am /trying/ to keep that in mind but you make it so hard when you write him being all happy and saying 'Beth and I' and all of that business!!!

If they are not going to fall in love I request you create a character based on me and insert her into the story. She could be a witch The Order saves from being attacked by Death Eaters and Sirius locks eyes with her and the rest is history . . . *day dreams*

I loved this chapter. It had a different tone to it from the rest of the story but it didn't feel out of place. I like how James was going about his duties but still managing to have fun with Sirius. I love it when we get to see James, Sirius and Remus together, it just makes me happy.

It's so weird that they are in the story but they aren't really and they don't exist yet, they are only a twinkle in their parents eyes. I hope we will get fluffly familyness from both the Longbottoms and the Potters. It's so heartbreaking that both families don't get to stay that way for very long so it will be lovely to see James, Lily, Frank and Alice as parents in this story. I have such a cute picture of how James is with Harry in my head already!

Oh also, James is so intuitive picking up on something with Beth and now Sirius. I really like how you portray James.

As much as it pains me to have to wait a week for the next chapter I really do love the fact I am caught up with the story and can see it unfold in real time. It takes me back to reading LO *squishes*

Author's Response: Ahaha! You and your Siribeth! ♥ It is important to remember that, of course, but for the time being you may imagine whatever you wish. I give you full permission to let your imagination run wild. ;)

I did feel the need, especially when writing these earlier chapters, to include a few that broke away from all the nighttime sneaking around, especially because the first six chapters all take place at night. :P That's something I didn't mean to do, but when I imagined this story, it always took place in darkness. I think it's a reflection of how I see the story... but anyway! Yes, there needs to be some light moments like these sprinkled throughout, I think.

Writing about Harry and Neville as really, really little kids is so weird! But we'll definitely see family things from them, of course -- mostly from James and Lily. I don't have my outline next to me right now, but I'm 99% sure this book ends just after Harry's born, so we'll see that before I move onto Breaking Even! And really quickly -- I'm so happy you like my James, too. He's massively fun to write. :)

I'm having LO flashbacks, too! :D I'm just so excited you're reading a story of mine on an update-to-update basis again, and really, just thank you. ♥ I honestly cannot tell you what it means to me!

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