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Review:SilentConfession says:
So i see this as an excessively old story but i love creeping the archives for jewels like this one. This is truly a great and emotional piece that i felt like i wanted to cry or hold Neville in my arms and tell him it's okay. I think you captured this sense of worthlessness in him so well and was able to expose this deep rooted inadequecy that i'm sure everyone can relate to on some level.

I loved how you brought plants into this story and how trying to help his parents was his motivation to become a herbologist. I thought that was very poignant and how he even wanted to become a plant because at least then he wouldn't feel as much.

I never really thought much about how Neville felt after the prophecy thing and this just made me feel even more for Neville and you did great showing how he internalizes all his failures and takes the blame for them.

When he was hit with the Cruicio... that was probably the most jaw dropping moment of this chapter. I also think it was my favourite part as you could just tell how desperate Neville was to have that connection with his parents.

Great job with writing this! This is lovely.

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