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Review:Gabriella Hunter says:
Hello!

Guess what? I'm back! I just stumbled across this a few seconds ago and devoured it with enormous speed! :D
As usual, it was a very enjoyable read and I especially liked Fleur's description of the ring that Bill had gotten her and her acceptance of it was very sweet. She wasn't quite the snob as anyone else would have thought! For a moment, her recalling Bill proposing to her confused me for just a second before I realized what was going on and it was the sweetest thing ever! The way he proposed was just...ah, perfection! So jealous!
And it was a very lovely read and I saw nothing in your pacing or grammar that needed attention. That last little bit made me gulp a little because while Fleur is looking forward to meeting Bill's family...they won't exactly like her. Hehehe. Can't wait to see how you're going to write that! :D I'm wishing her the best of luck though, she's a dear.
P.S.: My computer shall be fixed by the end of this month and I'm updating all of my stories by three chapters so look out for that! :D
Much love,
Gabbie

Author's Response: Hello!

You don't know how long it took me to decide just how Bill was going to propose to Fleur, literally, I wrote this chapter several different ways before I was satisfied with it, so I'm glad you liked it! Yes, Fleur may be something of a reformed character, so she's staisfied with the ring!

Poor Fleur, eh? So full of optimism and joy for meeting her future inlaws, oh dear! The next few chapters will be all about her meeting the Weasleys, so be on the lookout, and I can't wait for your next updates!!


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