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Review:Voldy Needs a Hug says:
One of the first things I noticed in your fanfiction was its originality. I was very impressed by the relatable characters, the interesting plot, and the smooth transitions you established.

My favorite character, so far, is definitely Finn. You're one of the few brave authors that is willing to create a gay character. This is one of the key features that makes your story unique. However, I felt that you spent a bit too long discussing Finn (her favorite subject, her name, etc.). Instead of outright describing her character, try hinting at her personality, her appearance, her favorite subject, etc. throughout the story.

The first chapter flowed very nicely, easily transitioning from one event to the next. Additionally, I was immediately drawn in by the plot, which was well-constructed.

Excellent job!

As Always,
Voldy Needs a Hug

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