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Review:Jchrissy says:
Wow Naida, what a powerful first chapter! I wanted to review this because I have an obsession with longer stories, and I'm currently caught up to most of my favorites.

So, anyway. Tom- what a tricky thing he would be to write. We know enough about him to have an idea and possibly know when he's ooc, but not enough to really know what traits to give him. So with that tricky little balance, you have done a masterful job. I am shocked and I think you should be very, very proud of the in depth understanding you seem to have acquired. Wait. This is Tom Riddle, should I be scared?? ;)

Amaya, what an interesting character - a fascinating OC! She's pureblood, she doesn't agree with that ideology, she has a crush on the words biggest pure blood supremacist! Obviously she doesn't know this now... but it has us swimming in a pool of irony!

I usually harp on authors for descriptions.. but yours are great. You have enough to give us a scene then you let it take control and let your story tell us the rest. It's a perfect combo.

Amaya seems very comfortable around Anabel, I'm excited to learn more about your other OC, too.

Anyway, I'm very excited to read the next chapter, this is a great and intriguing start!

Jami

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