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Review:slytherinchica08 says:
How could I have left this story for as long as I have? And its not even like I've been gone for long but now that I'm reading it again I'm sad that I did leave it for as long as I did because this story is just so good!

My heart broke for both Scorpius and Rose at the end when he finally admitted to her that he still loved her and she couldn't work up enough courage to say out loud that she still loves him too! I'm so excited that the traders are caught but at the same time wondering what will happen next for our crew of characters.

I only found two errors throughout the chapter, at the very beginning I found a small error in this sentence, "Scorpius, ever the keen reporter, had spotter someone skulking around the elevators." spotter should be spotted. There was also a small mistake in this part, "When we hit the bottom floor, were we’d been only hours earlier, in a cell, I looked at Scorpius, and shrugged." were should be where.

Altogether this was another wonderful chapter and I'm excited to see how things will be playing out in the next few chapters and hope that Rose will soon breakout her courage and finally admit to Scorpius that she still loves him too! Great Job!

~Slytherinchica08~

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