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Review:Voldy Needs a Hug says:
One of the main things I noticed while reading this fanfiction was the excessive use of the word "mate." Last time I checked, "mate" was of an Australian origin, and Harry Potter takes place in Britain.

Also, I noticed numerous spelling, punctuation, and grammatical errors, which you might want to consider fixing.

Lastly, I found the plot to be a bit boring. I didn't feel compelled to continue reading. I would suggest removing some of the description and unnecessary dialogue.

Keep writing!

Author's Response: Actually, they use it in Britain, too. Look it up on Google if you don't believe me.

Really? alright, I'll go back and look but I do have a beta that looked through it a few times.

Alright, thanks for the advice.

I think you might want to change some things in your review thread, honestly. You said for every negative thing you post that you would say something positive and I really don't see anything positive here. Anyways, thanks for the review..

-Amanda



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