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Review:harrypotterforever24 says:
As always, I really liked this chapter! I like Sarah a lot- she's actually one of my favorite characters. But I was wondering if you could make the chapters a little longer, or have more stuff happening. Because I like your writing style and I think if you added a few more scenes in your chapters they could be elevated to another level.
Also, does James like his girlfriend? Because he seems to be drawn to Lily really quickly after just one encounter and he probably knows that lots of girls at Hogwarts like him.
So yeah! That's it I think. I like where the story is going! And I watched a few scenes of the movie on YouTube because of this story! Is Ted supposed to be like the guy on the bus? If so, then you portrayed him just right :D

Author's Response: I love you so much really! You've reviewed every chapter and everything... Its just so fab!

That's funny that you say that because I thought that maybe I wrote too much for one chapter. I see all these other chapters and the words are no more than 3,000. So I thought I was boring you guys :/ But forget that then, long chapters it is!!

Thanks for the compliment! ^.^When I'm writing this, I just to have fun with this hoping you whoever reads this can have a laugh or at least have a smile on their face.

Yes, James is so troubling right? Like whats his deal? If he doesn't like Caroline, then why is he with her?!? But like Lily said in this chapter "Appearances lie..." So what I'm hoping to do is present Caroline's problem and the real reason he's with her. And for James and his popularity... will unravel that even more...

I'm hoping to include a good scene where Lily and James actually talk with little interruptions, so from there, you'll see some genuine feelings and not lust from an accident.

Sarah? Isn't she just the best? AND Remember Henry that was mentioned in the first chapter? He's going to be mentioned very son...

And yes Ted is from the bus. He has to be my fave and I've been dying to introduce him because he's just so funny and I can make him say the most cringing-embarrassing things! and hiss character is just going to keep getting more flamboyant until something happens DUN DUN DUN.


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