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Review:Pixileanin says:
Hey! I made it back for chapter two!

Dorcas is very feisty and reckless here! Look what happens when you give someone talented and powerful the authority to use it...

I think you've set up the reason for her "popularity" among the Death Eaters very well. She definitely has that "cocky Auror" attitude going for her, as well as being a competent duelist, and I like that her sister is her weak spot, so well done there. And I also like how you've managed to show the way that all of these wizards and witches knew each other, or at least knew of each other. It seems to be a small world out there for the magical community, so that makes sense.

I also liked how you described her strategy for fighting Dark Magic, and that your fight scene wasn't simply a volley of hexes thrown about. You did Moody pretty well too. I'll have to come back for chapter three, though it might take a bit. RL has taken over again.

This was a fun read!

Author's Response: Oh, thank you!

Oh yes, she's feisty. It quite often gets her in over her head.

I find it hard to believe that these kids went to school together for so many years and didn't know at least of each other. I know I only went to high school for 4 years, and though I didn't know everyone well, I could tell you most people's names.

Fight scenes are one of the things I have struggle the hardest with, so I just stuck something in there that isn't so difficult for me. I'm glad you appreciated that though.

I look forward to seeing you back :)


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