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Review:The Last Marauder says:
Ah this was just lovely. It took me quite a while to figure out that Trevor was actually telling the story, but that was more to do with my brain not working, than your story. I really liked this, it was just so lovely to read. Trevor wanted to get free, but never being able to - it's something I never put much thought into! Trevors opinions on Neville were interesting too.

This was just a great little story! It's like what JK Rowling said on Pottermore, in the end Trevor did escape into the lake and all both he and Neville felt was an enormous sense of relief! So all of Trevor's escape attempts are worth it in the end, because he does eventually make it to the lake!

Great one-shot - I really liked it :)

Author's Response: I do try to make it so that you can't work out who the story is about at the beginning. I also love writing things that most people wouldn't think twice about or would never imagine a character doing or thinking, but making it all fit and seem like it works!
WOO TREVOR! I didn't actually know he made it in the end! When I wrote this, I just imagined that he would want to, so I'm mildly amused that I made this fit with canon without realising it :P
Thanks for the review!

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