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Review:Dark Whisper says:
Angelique,

Well, this was a long first chapter. I have to stick with Harry on this one. Everyone seems to be acting a bit strange around this mysterious person who he thinks is a death eater.

And I don't like her. She is mean and cruel and I don't like what comes out of her mouth at all. I wouldn't trust her one inch. XD

But if Snape taught Harry anything, it is that people might not be as they seem. Hmm.

I find it interesting on where you are starting your story... within Hogwarts just after the battle. Very interesting.

Dark Whisper

Author's Response: I'm so glad you've started to read my story! I almost hate to mention this, but I have to: I have some edits to this chapter waiting to be validated. The edits won't change your opinion of Serena, however ;) SHE didn't get edited! They just make the other characters seem more realistic in the face of all the mysteries Harry is witnessing.

Thanks for reviewing! :)


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