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Review:The Last Marauder says:
I loved how you wrote this in the voice of Emmy Fish. You described everything the way she did, and that really helps to draw the reader into the story.

Loved your opening few lines, they really grab attention and keep the reader engaged and eager for more - the idea of a nightmare of a pickle was good too. I also really liked your story summary, it really made me want to read this fic.

As far as first ever fan-fictions go, I thought this was really good. I loved how you did Emmy and how you did James too (he appears to have a lot of the traits of both his namesakes - James and Sirius)

So why was James up near Ravenclaw tower? ;)

Anyway, great fic, really well done :)

Author's Response: Hi there and thank you for the review! =)

Emmy's character actually took a little while to emerge, she had originally quite a different story arch in the first draft than what it's now going to be. But trust me, this one is way better than the original one...

Thanks, I have a couple of other WIPs going on now too and writing them and this makes me very happy.

James has indeed inherited some traits from James and Sirius, but under his showy exterior there's quite more there. You will just have to wait and see... ;)


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