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Review:Loopy456 says:
Hi again :) Now, I am so, so sorry for taking almost a month to get back to this, but my life turned upside down and got incredibly complicated, so reading anything has been the last thing on my mind. I'm back now though :)
There was a lot to take in in this chapter. I liked finding out a bit more about Leo, but that really only posed more questions than it answered. Blaise is right, there is a lot that Astoria's not saying. I hope we get to find out more soon.
I'll be interested to see where this goes once they get to Hogwarts. I can't imagine that Astoria is going to be terribly popular with Draco et al...
Oh, and your very last line was brilliant, I have to say! Lovely writing :D Now that I've caught up with your updates on this, I shall have to start pestering you for more :P Will you be updating soon?

Alex :D

Author's Response: Hello!

Hey, don't sweat not reviewing in a while! I totally know how you feel with life being turned upside down, I'm still going through the same thing myself! You have my full support! :D
Yeah, there was a bit more to take in with this chapter, I realized almost too late that I had alot of plotholes that needed to be filled in just a little. Especially with Leo, whom I'd had the thought of not introducing at all but it was too late by this time since I'd mentioned him back in the sixth chapter. He is no longer a part of the Greengrass family for whatever reason (I can't tell you...sigh.) and his entire description did pose alot of questions. I didn't want to reveal too much though since it comes up again later and Blaise is far too perceptive for his own good! Astoria isn't saying alot to him because she isn't quite sure how and her life is on the line and his as well. When I write them all going to Hogwarts, its going to be drama left and right and more nasty retorts from all sides! Astoria won't be popular with Draco, her family or the other purebloods by the time they're all together again. Things don't exactly turn out right for her...I just love torturing my females. :D
Thanks for the compliment~! I think I did okay, this was my favorite chapter to write for this story in a long time and I tried my hardest! Pester all you please, I will give you more updates! Its been ages since I've typed anything but my computer shall be fixed by the end of this month and I'll be updating all of my stories by at least three chapters to make up for my absence. So look out for it and more reviews from me!
Much love,
Gabbie

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