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Review:CharlieDay says:
Aw, that was extremely cute! I can just imagine that being Ron's first piece of magic. That of course leads me to say that all the characterisations in this story are very good, very believable, even the characters which are only mentioned in passing.
The only crit I really have for this story is the fact that I don't really feel it flows very well, it's quite broken, in a way.
From what I could tell, your rammar use was totally perfect! Like I said before, this is a totally adorable story, and Molly seemed like really mothering.
If you ever want me to review anything else, my thread is always open.
Thanks for the chance to read a wonderful story,

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing :)
I'm glad you think that the characters are believable,I don't normally write about the weasley's as a family so thanks! :)
I'll have a look back over the story and see if i can make it flow better and thanks again!

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