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Review:Dark Whisper says:

Wow... the beach. You have wonderfully described this gorgeous place... the sandy beach, the glass house, the balcony, the sounds of the rolling waves... amazing descriptions. Highly romantic!

I really loved that they sat in silence. She didn't want to talk. He didn't press her. But he was 'there' for her regardless. Just beautiful.

And she is feeling the beginnings of peace. Wow! I really love this part of your characterization of her. Inner peace is a beautiful thing and I'm so happy that you are slowly giving it to her.

I think your chapters are getting better and better and I most certainly want more. You have me wondering what Astoria might know about Seth. (Hmm?)

Congrats on a wonderfully descriptive chapter.

Dark Whisper

Author's Response: Dark,

I just want to start off by saying thank you for taking the time to review all my chapters. I love reading your review and the insight that comes with them.

I had an idea in my head about what this place should look like but I hope I didn't kill the chapter with too much description. It is a romantic place and I'm so torn about where this story should go now but I have a few different places in my head.

I'm glad you pointed out that particular scene because I was hoping it wasn't over kill but you seemed to enjoy so I'm going to assume it wasn't :)

Inner peace is a very beautiful thing and paramount to this story.

More truth about Seth will be revealed shortly. I hope you do continue to read because I love hearing from you.

Until next time...


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