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Review:Courtney says:
I liked Sixteen Candles when I was younger, but I have to say that both Jake Ryan and James in this story come off looking really stupid and shallow for being with their girlfriends in the first place. Why on earth is James putting up with her bossing him around; you haven't really given her any redeemable qualities other than her looks and he looks pretty terrible to be trying to hit on another girl while still with his girlfriend. I don't know if you are planning to follow the movie pretty faithfully, but I would like James a lot better if he got his act together quicker and didn't stay with someone who doesn't really have anything going for her other than her looks. His character isn't very developed in the movie, so you could do more interesting things here. And I would respect Lily a lot more if she didn't put up with him pursuing her while still with this girlfriend, even if she is terrible. I do like the other characters though.

Author's Response: Yes the movie is great isn't it? I totally agree with you, throughout the movie I realized how Jake didn't really have any real feelings with the girl he was with. So the whole time I wondered why? Why would you be with a girl if she didn't interest you at all? And that's when I started coming up with ideas why. Maybe the girl had a more going on behind the scenes that we don't get to see. And the whole reason why Jake was with her, was because he didn't want her to face that alone.

With that said, you can see what I'm going to lead to with the Caroline and her part of the story. Remember appearances lie...

Don't worry, Lily can be such a teenager because I simply wrote her that way BUT I am determined to show her less vulnerable side. Because right now all we're seeing is the side that's insecure and naive really. All i ask is to wait a bit longer and you may see the development.

And about James, I have something planned for him, he-he

THANKS FOR THE REVIEW!


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