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Review:AC_rules says:
Hey there! Its AC here reviewing all the challenge entries! Sorry its taken a while to get down to reviewing the entries - real life and the house cup have been getting in the way.

Soo this was a really interesting start to what seems like a really intriguing story! You have a hell of a lot of plot in this first chapter whhich is pretty intriguing and I can honestly say I have no idea what's going to happen next (although I suspect I'm sensing the beginning of a Pansy/Neville plot, which isn't something I've ever said before?)

So, kudos for originality. You don't see much about Pansy Parkinson about and this was an interesting take on her character. The obliviate thing too...wow, that was interesting. I think my favourite part of this was the opening and my least favourite thing has to be the last line - it just felt a tad melodramatic for me.

Never the less this was a great entry to my challenge and i'll be posting the results later today :)

-AC

Author's Response: Oh wow! Thanks for the review! Sorry I haven't been around the site much (work caught up with me) so I don't even know the end results yet, but I'm glad you came over and seemed to like the idea! :D Yeah, the Neville and Pansy story is a new one, and I'm glad to really be one to do such an unloved pairing. I'm really glad you liked the idea though. Yeah, the last line was a bit melodramatic, but that is sort of how I'm trying to play her off. ;) She still has her flippant attitude of a seventeen year old. Again, thanks for the review and coming over to check it out!

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