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Review:maskedmuggle says:
"Isn't this beautiful?" YESSS! This was a beautiful one-shot! The majority of stories in response to the prompts involve action/adventure/dreams so to read something as reflection-y and quiet/peaceful like this is really different but fantastic. I just thought it was really well written and just really beautiful. I really liked the comparison between the light of the Bones and the flame of the Hungarian Horntail - it was also really clever - you managed to incorporate all the prompts in such a flawless way.

I also liked Susan's characterisation - she was very interesting and the thoughts and emotions that came from her felt very real. So, I don't really know how to comment on stories like this - there is just something special about it I can't quite explain - and your writing is pretty amazing. I really enjoyed it :)

- Charlotte

Author's Response: Hey Charlotte! Wow wow wow! I don't know how to respond to a review like this! bahhh! I'm trying not to just flail about in happiness but it's not working so well.

I'm happy that you thought it was different, i didn't really want my story to revolve around the prompts, but rather, i wanted them to seem as if they were made for the story. (does that even make sense?) I'm pleased beyond reason you felt like they fit there so well, whenever i read it back to myself it just seemed like the prompts were glaring at me so obviously.

I've really enjoyed writing about Susan as i feel like she's so underloved and unrepresented in many fics (maybe not now since there were quite a few pufftastic stories on her) and i'm glad you connected with this quite strength of here.

Thank you so much for stopping by and giving me a review, i really appreciate it!!

-zayne.

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