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Review:TyrannicFeenix says:
Absoulte cracker. I love AU fics because it's so much fun to see where the authors here will run off to. And this is as clever and AU as I have ever seen.

Ok time for picky Feenix. Noticed one or two things that feel alittle off or need fixing, listed below:

Should say "'The' Daily Prophet had had a field day..."
'Our clinic specialises in hopeless cases, like yours' would likely run a little better.
Instead of 'the nurses hit her with petrificus totalus' might be better to say, 'the nurses hit her with a full body bind'
'I feel like I never had a change to be good' should be chance

And now the super positives:

Must say I love sugar-dosed Bellatrix and the glitter cannons and care bear tactics. Maybe you should do an AU final battle where they do just that.
Also the graveyard breath... hilarious. Where do you come up with this stuff???
It was really funny to hear such language from what initially seemed such a polite and friendly witch, but it was nicely to the point. Gave VoldyShoes a good rerprimanding.
Whole thing was even funnier because I got Bellatrix in the picture at the top. Looks like she was laying around grumpy because she lost her sugar quill.


Overall a REALLY good fic, might have to go read some of the others soon too. Great job.

Author's Response: Hi! Thanks for stopping by for the review. =)

Thanks for catching the errors, they are so sneaky ones, that fresh eyes were surely needed. Happily I just got a beta for this story, so I'll get it edited very soon!

Lol. It would be an epic battle to be sure. I'll think about it.

I have no idea where the half of this stuff comes from, I just type and there it is. I guess my mind is pretty silly place. =)

That Bellatrix picture is pretty grumpy one. She most certainly needs some sugar in her life. =)

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